viernes, 24 de mayo de 2013

Just a little taste of hell (Canción)

I have seen the beauty around you
And then I thought I would have you
Not now, but neither i will give up

I don't care if in the whitest time
The entire world is falling apart
I just want to hold you in my eternal blight


(Chorus)

So breach this river for once
Break my curse, my sin
And everything I grief for

For once and ever I shall rapt your soul
For once and ever I shall rapt your soul

(Chorus End)


In this abyss I´ve waiting
With only dead as my backing
She only knows how much I long for you

You know neither of this worlds can hold us together
But we can create a new one with the ashes of us both
So lets be burnt by the fire of lust and we will fly then like phoenixes rising again

(Chorus)

So breach this river for once
Break my curse, be my eternal sin
And everything I grief for

For once and ever I shall rapt your soul
For once and ever I shall rapt your soul
For once and ever I shall take you all
For once and ever I shall take you all

(Chorus End)

6 comentarios:

  1. Mirándola bien, ¿sabe que sería chévere? En el último estribillo que va "...rapt my soul" (bis x 4) debería buscar otra frase más y ponerla en medio ¿Me hago entender? "...rapt my soul" x 2 y otra que rime x2. No sé, me parecería que le daría no solo más fluidez sino que también la haría mas diversa.

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    1. Sabe que sí, tiene toda la razón, me podré a buscar como mejorarlo, e igual si a alguien se le ocurre, acepto sugerencias.

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  2. hay uuuuuuuuuuuaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaoooooooooooooooo

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